Third Draft

This is the third edit of my music video.

This is the best edit so far, there are shots of every outfit and a lot of them. It is seductive and hopefully appeals to my target audience. I added a lot more series shots of Roni and made it look professional by not adding any funny shots. The lip syncing is a bit out but I will sort that out in my next edit. I have extended the shot of Roni in there pool saying 'I won't' because it looked beautiful and inciting. David's section is very improvised and R&B but works very well because even though it is supposed to be a seductive song, his section is relatable and fun because he looks cool and comfortable. Throughout his section the amount of shots and how long the shots go on for increases because the rap get more intense. When this section finishes I made sure Roni started singing the chorus in time and it wasn't still on David when it comes on.