Evidence of me editing my video again. I didn't get feedback from my target audience this time because I wanted to look at the video myself and decide what I liked and didn't like so I could change it myself. I am going to change the section with the hips and leg, I'm going to take out Roni walking in reverse because it was like she was walking away from the scene when we want the audience to be drawn in not taking a step backwards. I am going to add footage of her hips and make the sure the shot starts without her head in it because I looked sort of like her head had been cut out and I was trying to cover it up. I will also tweak the last section and make sue the lip sync is perfect.
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